Just click here
Alrite.
Here's the song.
Do you know what the worst thing is?
The sound quality just keeps going down by the process to put it on the web.
Oh well, that's just an excuse anyway...
Well, I don't like the song much, because it's using same old guitar codes that I use all the time. But for some reason, recording went pretty quick and good.
Lyrics is simple but I guess it isnt so bad.
Falling (working title) Demo
"Falling leaves are from the trees
I don't want to know why they change how they look
You walk on, look around and will know,
no one seems to care if you're there or not
When will I reach the star I'm looking for?
When will I get the answer I'm waiting for?
If I could
Throw away
Everything I have
Everything I want
Maybe I have seen
The end of the world
Maybe I have seen
Baybe I have seen... "
...Just to remind you... it's a demo for a demo...
Here's the song.
Do you know what the worst thing is?
The sound quality just keeps going down by the process to put it on the web.
Oh well, that's just an excuse anyway...
Well, I don't like the song much, because it's using same old guitar codes that I use all the time. But for some reason, recording went pretty quick and good.
Lyrics is simple but I guess it isnt so bad.
Falling (working title) Demo
"Falling leaves are from the trees
I don't want to know why they change how they look
You walk on, look around and will know,
no one seems to care if you're there or not
When will I reach the star I'm looking for?
When will I get the answer I'm waiting for?
If I could
Throw away
Everything I have
Everything I want
Maybe I have seen
The end of the world
Maybe I have seen
Baybe I have seen... "
...Just to remind you... it's a demo for a demo...
posted by writer at
5:44 PM
7 Comments:
koooool :D i like the lyrics, you always write good lyrics! make sure u put the finished version up too!
By
Hanako, at 4:43 AM
I like the lyrics. Simple, but kind of open ended to draw your own conclusion with.
By
Ragnarok, at 4:57 AM
Thanks for the comments.
You know it makes me pretty sad if I put up a song and no one say a thing about it.
By
writer, at 8:22 PM
I only just listened to it...it's ok musically simple which I live, although I think it's missing a good bass line and more comprehensive percussion. That's my honest opinion and I think the vocals could probably go up and octave.
That sounds awfully critical, it isn't meant to be.
By
Ragnarok, at 9:50 PM
You know what
Not many people give me such creative advices...
They just say it's good or bad
which doesn't help me much
cos I sometimes need objective opinions so
appriciate it!
By
writer, at 11:47 PM
I do some sound engineering in my spare time, I'm used to listening to some real bad stuff but yours wasn't it could be better though.
By
Ragnarok, at 6:53 AM
You do sound engineering?
That is so cool!
By
writer, at 8:38 AM
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